Hi! Over
the last couple weeks I've shared some of my favorite tricks for
planning a story, bubble-mapping and drawing.
Both of those are strategies I use for brainstorming and planning a
story. This next strategy focuses on organizing your ideas so that
you're ready to write.
Equipment
required: Colored pens, index cards*,
and tape.
It's
likely that as you've thought about your story, some of the story's
moments have become very clear in your head. Examples: Your hero
meets her mentor. Your hero steals a golden apple. Your villain hacks
into the NORAD computers, and thinks he's
undetected.
Write
each of these idea-moments on a separate index card.
Notice
that I've used two colors on this card. Each major character has his
or her own color. That way, when I organize the cards, I'll be able
to follow each of their storylines and see any gaps. (When a major
character is offstage, as, for example, the wizard Simon is in parts
of the Jinx books, you still need to know where s/he is and
what s/he's doing.)
Now look
at your bubble-maps. (See last week's post.) Read through them
carefully. Identify anything in your maps that looks like it should be
a scene or a story-moment.
Make
a separate index card for each of these story moments.
Keep
making index cards till you run out of scenes and story moments.
(Note:
If I have a lot I want to write on a card, I sometimes start out with a
Sharpie, but finish with a ballpoint pen.)
Now,
it's time to play with your cards.
Sort
through them. You'll notice that some of the scenes clearly belong at
the beginning of the story, others near the end. Lay them out on a
flat surface, in the order in which you think they might occur. The
beginning of the story goes at the top, the end of the story at the
bottom. If two or more ideas seem like they should happen at the same
time, put them side-by-side.
Keep
moving them around till you think you've got them where you want
them.
You'll
probably find some of your cards don't fit in anywhere. That's okay.
It may be that those scenes don't actually belong in the story, or it
may be that you'll figure out a place for them later.
You may
also find gaps. Don't worry about that right now either.
When you
think you have all the cards in the right order, tape them to the
wall.
Now it's time to fill in those gaps.
Take
some more blank index cards. Think about what scenes you might use to
fill in the gaps. Jot them on the cards, and add them to the wall.
Read
through what you've got.
Now look
at the storyline for each of your main characters. (Just follow his or her color-code down the wall.) Do any
individual characters have gaps? It's okay, for now, if they do. They
may end up having gaps in the story. Just remember that you've always
got to know where the major characters are, and, if they leave the
story in the middle, you have to know what became of them. If a major
character is left hanging, fill in an index card to show what he's
doing.
When
your wall of cards is finished, you're ready to write.
You can
start writing your novel directly from what's on the wall.
Or you
can divide your wall into chapters, hanging a slip of paper with the
chapter number on it next to each section on the wall. (I've done that in the last picture above.)
Or you
can use your wall display as a basis for a traditional written
outline.
I've tried all of these, and they all work.
And
there you have 'em, as Casey Kasem used to say. My three main
strategies for pre-writing a novel. I hope you find them useful for
planning your own.
Good
luck!
*Some
writers use sticky notes instead of index cards. I like the index
cards because they're sturdier, easier to rearrange, and cheaper.
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