As hopefully a bit of encouragement to
those typing away madly this month, I submit my NaNoWriMo success
story.
I drafted Jinx during NaNoWriMo of
2009. Before that, I spent several months drawing pictures of the
characters and the Urwald. I was exploring rather than planning. I'm
not one of those who plans out every scene before writing. I like to
let the story tell itself.
I had also made a couple attempts to
write what I thought was going to be the opening scene. In this
scene, the wizard Simon was supposed to strangle Jinx. But Simon
wouldn't do it. He refused. That was important. It's always helpful
when characters get all up in your face and tell you who they really
are. Pay attention.
Anyway, November 2009. A friend in an
online writing chat coaxed me into participating. I didn't sign up
for NaNoWriMo on the site... I just did it. 2,000 words a day, more
or less, with a couple days off here and there.
Typety type type type. What else can I
say?
After every 10,000 words, I went out to
lunch at the Mongolian barbecue. I have very fond memories of the
chef, who did not know he was providing my NaNoWriMo reward, as we
lacked a common language.
November 30th, 2009: done!
The finished product was not a finished product. Whole scenes were
missing, with italicized notes saying what needed to happen in them.
Extraneous scenes were all over the place. There were places where
the text read What are you trying to do here? Never mind, just say
something. Write something. Write anything. Keep writing.
It also lacked, and I feel this is
important, a plot.
But it had 50,000 words. I gave a small
nod of satisfaction and set it aside for a few weeks. I looked at it
again and recoiled in horror. I rewrote. I rewrote again. I showed it
to a few people. And rewrote again.
It was seventeen months after NaNoWriMo
that Jinx was ready to go out on submission. By that time, nearly all
the scenes from the original NaNoWriMo draft were gone. The 50k words
had become 75k, on the long side for middle grade. The manuscript was acquired by HarperCollins.
This could happen with that thing
you're working on. Why not?
As you can tell from this tale, writing
is 94.4444% revision. But without drafting, you have nothing to
revise.
So get out there and draft! Write something. Write anything.
Keep writing.
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